Saturday, December 17, 2005

One Page Post

Here's my one page for the one-page post thing started up by Red Right Hand. I'd like to use John August's nifty technique for splatting scripts into the web, since it retains the formatting and reads well--but I lack the skillz to do so (and suspect Blogger will slap me around anyway). I'll punt to the jpeg instead (click to engorge):


ScriptWeaver said...

I gasped at the end. Nicely done. Sweet first page.

Konrad West said...

A nice "holy shit" twist at the end. Great!

Patrick J. Rodio said...

Damn, that was rough. Very nice.